Changes between Version 3 and Version 4 of Private/RefereeComments/Section_6

Timestamp:

Aug 26, 2013, 9:02:59 AM (11 years ago)

Author:

cp3-support

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Private/RefereeComments/Section_6

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 Figure 3
 
- * It is not clear what the grey bands are in this plot. Shouldn’t they be removed? In CMS, they are supposed to cover differences between the simulation and the data in CMS, not the difference between Delphes and CMS. This comment is valid for all plots 
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-Strangely enough, the ATLAS fred band width is way smaller than that for CMS. Does it represent the same thing ?
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+ * It is not clear what the grey bands are in this plot. Shouldn’t they be removed? In CMS, they are supposed to cover differences between the simulation and the data in CMS, not the difference between Delphes and CMS. This comment is valid for all plots. Strangely enough, the ATLAS fred band width is way smaller than that for CMS. Does it represent the same thing ?
  * For all plots, it is important to have the statistical uncertainty bars indicated, or to state that they are covered by the size of the markers. In the latter case, an explanation is needed for the apparent scatter of the DELPHES points, and to compare this scatter with the input resolution function.
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  * For all plots, label, legends, etc... are way too small to be readable.