Changes between Version 2 and Version 3 of Private/RefereeComments/Language
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v2 v3 20 20 PAGE 2 21 21 22 Introduction 22 == Introduction == 23 23 24 24 Second paragraph: … … 63 63 replace it by the present tense in most cases. 64 64 65 Section 2 65 == Section 2 == 66 66 67 67 L3: I am not sure of ”symmetric along the beam axis”, especially the word 68 68 ”along”. How about ”with a cylindrical symmetry around the beam axis” ? 69 69 70 Section 2.1 70 === Section 2.1 === 71 71 72 72 L2: What is the meaning of ”The magnetic field is applied” ? Applied to … … 91 91 resolution is assumed” 92 92 93 Section 2.2 93 === Section 2.2 === 94 94 95 95 Par 1: … … 106 106 PAGE 4 107 107 108 Section 2.3 108 === Section 2.3 === 109 109 110 110 Par 1: … … 121 121 PAGE 5 122 122 123 Section 2.3 123 === Section 2.3 === 124 124 125 125 Last paragraph, L1 : ”consists in” should be ”consists of” … … 127 127 PAGE 6 128 128 129 Section 3.1.3 129 ==== Section 3.1.3 ==== 130 130 131 131 L1: Why is ”isolated” in italics ? ”surrounding” should be ”surroundings”, or better, ”vicinity” … … 139 139 PAGE 7 140 140 141 Section 3.2.2 141 ==== Section 3.2.2 ==== 142 142 143 143 Title : no hyphen between ”tau” and ”jets” … … 149 149 PAGE 8 150 150 151 Section 3.2.2 151 ==== Section 3.2.2 ==== 152 152 153 153 Par 2: … … 158 158 L6: ”is wrongly” should be ”be wrongly” (subjunctive is in order here). 159 159 160 Section 3.3 160 === Section 3.3 === 161 161 162 162 L(N-1) : ”particle-flow candidates” is an undefined concept at this level. … … 173 173 PAGE 15 174 174 175 Section 7.1 175 === Section 7.1 === 176 176 177 177 Par 1: … … 217 217 Figure 7, 8, ... : ”ref.” should be ”Ref.” 218 218 219 Section 7.2 219 === Section 7.2 === 220 220 221 221 L1: ”Searching the Higgs particle produced via VBF, and decaying to a
