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v5 v6 53 53 >> This would make more clear why we only apply it to jets and MET: there is no PF-like approach that we can follow for muons, electrons, etc., as those are already perfectly identified objects in our simulation. 54 54 55 >>> We'd rather call this particle-flow emulation later, but not mentioning the word particle-flow here (otherwise we have to cite).56 >>> We believe it is better to have a smooth introduction of Eflow (aleph,atlas) and pflow (cms) in the dedicated section.55 >>> We'd rather call this particle-flow emulation later, but not mentioning the word particle-flow here (otherwise we have to explain in more details what it means and cite). 56 >>> We believe it is better to have a smooth introduction of Eflow (aleph,atlas) and pflow (cms) in the particle-flow emulation dedicated section (section 2.3). 57 57 58 58 The suggestion regarding the last two comments is to explain that all … … 83 83 >>>with respect to the prior version. The modular aspects of Delphes are explained 84 84 >>>in the technical description part, which was moved in the appendix section. 85 >>>At this stage it is enough for the non-software expert reader to know that modular 86 >>> implies greater flexibility. 85 87 86 88 Paragraph 5: … … 99 101 at the beginning of the paragraph, and replace ”(good)”. 100 102 103 >>>addressed "Charged particles have a user-defined probability to be seen as tracks" 104 101 105 >>(Michele suggested introduction) 102 106 … … 112 116 113 117 The modeling of the detector, as well as the reconstruction and validation of the physical observables will be described. A couple of illustrative use cases of Delphes in the context of LHC studies are presented. 114
