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Changes between Version 12 and Version 13 of Private/RefereeComments/Introduction


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Oct 15, 2013, 3:34:54 PM (11 years ago)
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Christophe Delaere
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    5757>>> We'd rather call this energy-flow, since this is what we are doing.
    58 >>> (CD) indeed, what we do is more an energy-flow. I would also cite CMS/ALEPH papers already in the introduction.
     58>>>>(CD) indeed, what we do is more an energy-flow. I would also cite CMS/ALEPH papers already in the introduction.
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    6060The suggestion regarding the last two comments is to explain that all
     
    8787>>>in the technical description part, which was moved in the appendix section.
    8888>>>At this stage it is enough for the non-software expert reader to know that modular
    89 >>> implies greater flexibility.
     89>>>implies greater flexibility.
    9090>>>>(CD) I would add to the text that "(...) providing a greater flexibility to the user and allowing the integration of \DELPHES routines in other projects.
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