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v11 v12 20 20 21 21 >>>(Michele) thanks for the references, I think we can include them all (see below in the suggested intro) 22 >>>>(CD) I agree. Still, I don't like the way you motivate the fast-sim, and I am sure that the referee will jump if we keep the text like this. Fast-sim is NOT ONLY for preliminary and inaccurate studies. It is tuned to reproduce fullsim and save CPU cycles. I would simply say "To face the limited computing resources and still allow the use of large samples (for example when scanning parameter spaces), LHC collaborations (...) " 22 23 23 24 Third paragraph: … … 28 29 29 30 >>> addressed 31 >>> (CD) please add "axial" as well, as requested. 30 32 31 33 L5: The energy smearing applies also to all other particles, not only to … … 54 56 55 57 >>> We'd rather call this energy-flow, since this is what we are doing. 58 >>> (CD) indeed, what we do is more an energy-flow. I would also cite CMS/ALEPH papers already in the introduction. 56 59 57 60 The suggestion regarding the last two comments is to explain that all … … 70 73 71 74 >>> it was actually bugged, and creating photons out of nowhere, but how can we say this to ref.? 75 >>>> (CD) I have no problem saying that to the referee. We can say in the text that the old version, while providing a good detector simulation, was providing a very simple (simplistic) approach to object reconstruction. 72 76 73 77 L3: Add ”to deliver a list of reconstructed and identified particles as close … … 84 88 >>>At this stage it is enough for the non-software expert reader to know that modular 85 89 >>> implies greater flexibility. 90 >>>>(CD) I would add to the text that "(...) providing a greater flexibility to the user and allowing the integration of \DELPHES routines in other projects. 86 91 87 92 Paragraph 5:
